Dear Uncle Hendrik,
Last week, the class I and friends of the class field trip to Argo Wisata Royal Family. There were thirty-two students and six teachers and Mr. Kodir as photographer visited the park. I and my friends went to Argo mini bus.
Argo Wisata in the Royal Family, I and my friends saw a variety of fruits Janis. There are durian, strawbery, salak, etc.. I was happy there. I and my friends also enjoyed rickshaws games water, flying fox, etc.. After enjoying games I and friends swam in a simple pond but very clean and cold.
At the end of my visit, I and friends asked teachers to gather at the restaurant, we had lunch together. The food was delicious. After lunch, the teachers asked to take photo together to be used as a report about trip reports to Argo Wisata Royal Family. Had to submit those are my correction for you.
Finally I and my friends came home with some fruits. Although I and my friends felt tired were satisfied, happy.
Yours sincerely,
Yulia Herlani Putri
Yulia Herlani Putri
-There are thirty-two students -> there were
BalasHapus-Mr. Kodir as grafer photos visit -> Mr.Kodir as photographer visited.....
-Me and I friends -> I and my friends
-I and my friends have to submit -> had to submit
Those are my correction for you. You get 80.